Pitch feedback

As you can see i showed my audience the pitch before i shot the pitch feedback.

From my feedback i am going to call my magazine origins as it is unique and most appropriate for the target audience.

They said they would like to see posters, stickers and competitions so i am going to include some of these in to my magazine to draw the target audience.

With my focus group i am going to use the red white and black as it is more appropriate for the target audience and they can see it as more professional.

The double page article will include either a interview with a local band or a local band member

The price will be £2.00 for the magazine as it is a new and unique magazine.